Critical exposition explaining why the main character’s heart was broken was entirely omitted in the initial uploads.
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This is a powerful metaphor for the story itself. Just as Bog fixes the chapter, so too will the characters attempt to fix their broken hearts. The meta-narrative and the fiction become mirrors. broken hearts still want to love ch 1 by bog fixed
Mara gave a small, sad smile—the first genuine expression he’d seen on her face since she walked in. "I hope you're right." broken hearts still want to love ch 1 by bog fixed